あなたの段落を Band 9 で見てみましょう。

IELTS Writing Task 2

In many countries, more and more people are buying goods online rather than in shops. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

この問題に答える本論の段落を1つ書いてください。明確な主張、理由、具体例を入れましょう。段落はチェックのあと保存されません。